Here's a challenge for anyone interested...  Use the following clip in 

a

Ranma fic.  You can rewrite it a little to make it more descriptive if 

you

wish.  the only requirement is that the same premise must still be 

there.

	"Mousse?" Shampoo asked, disbelieving of the way Mousse was acting.

	"I hate you, Shampoo," Mousse spat.  "Die."

	With that, Mousse launched into a flurry of kicks and punches, far too
many for Shampoo to even attempt to block.  Nearly every one connected,
each with power that Shampoo never thought Mousse capable of mustering.	

The

last hit sent Shampoo flying into the wall.  Just before passing out, 

she

heard Mousse one last time.

	"Now, Shampoo, the real pain begins."



Any takers?

Not much as a full take, just ending it I suppose.


Shampoo looked up from the floor seeing Mousse, shaking with his head 
bowed,  staring at the floor.

" I tried Shampoo, I really tried. But it never was enough was it? No 
matter what I do, it's always Ranma you turned to..."

Shampoo still couldn't see his eyes. But saw instead a dagger clutched 
tightly in his right hand which he took out from his robe.

"No matter what I did-" 

Mousse cuts his left arm , blood drips down to the floor.

"It was never enough..."

Shampoo just looks on, troubled by Mousse's actions.

"I defeated you in combat, by amazon laws, you are mine. Yet,  you still 
yearn for Ranma. -"

Mousse tears off his robe.

"I've failed..."

And with those words said, he plants the dagger in his chest. Shampoo 
just sat there shocked. Disbelief plain in her eyes as she watched 
Mousse sink down to the floor.

"I love you Shampoo. I always did. And I always will..."

And with those final words, of love, Mousse passed away.

Shampoo leaped to her feet, and sat down beside Mousse and cradled his 
head on her lap. But was already too late, Mousse was dead. And she felt 
pain. Pain she had never felt before, and it hurt her even more than any 
physical injury she'd ever received.

And she wept in... 


Well, that's that for my rant. "Falling for an Angel" is almost 
complete, just give me a few more days and it will be out soon.

Sincerely,
Kahlil N.

Author of the fic "Ranma 1/2 A Chinese Ghost Story"

" Frost fills the sky over Ten Mile Lake,
  Silken threads anxious of youth....
  Looking at the moon and feeling lonely...
  Envious of lovers, not of immortality.
  Envious of love, not of immortality. " 

        - Excerpt from the movie " A Chinese Ghost Story "

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