[Dragonball Z / Ranma 1/2 / Star Trek]

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Title: Love Hurts
Series: Star Trek/DBZ/Ranma
Genre: Novel/Xover
Author: SuperAkane
Email: superakane@yahoo.com

{Shunsuke}
   Uhh...I dunno.  This doesn't really go anywhere >(except maybe to

let the author gush publicly about >her favorite ST:V character).  The
characters from >Ranma (are there any DBZ?  I don't watch it) feel
like >an afterthought, and don't really do much besides 

facilitate the two ST couples' actions.  The writer >does have a good

idea of how to set up a romantic >scene, but there's not much else
here.  With a little >more, sure, it'd be interesting.

i do agree with what you are saying; it is a work in progress, not
even finished, well writing anyway.  i know my plans for it.  the
ranma characters are making more of an appearance as the story
develops (as the protaganist leaves behind her fave character in the
dust to make way for her fave ranma character).  

and i think i'm an awful writer of romance...this is my first real
attempt other than the other star trek fluff i've written.  and the
dragonball is coming soon in the story...anyone who is interested i'll
send you my meager notes.  

though i may not finish this story on this list since i have gotten no
C&C whatsoever (except for the throughly enjoyable MST)...so i'm
getting the feeling my writing's unwelcome.  so i'm going to post the
rest of the story and see what happens

superakane
(who really wishes she hadn't deleted her other messages because she
was over her quota)
==
"Don't think too badly of Akane.  She's really a very sweet girl.  She's just a violent maniac."

"Oh, good, Kasumi.  That makes LOTS of sense.

Kasumi and Nabiki, Ranma 1/2 manga.

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