hehe...I just got throught reading part 3.  Been reading from part 1 for
about a week now. whew!  this is a long fic.

Keener, you are a really good writer, you know that? It seems like Ryouga
is almost the bad guy in this fic. That's a surprise, but I think the
little bit of seriousness makes it much more interesting. Just how far
will Ryouga go to get his revenge? hehe.  I hope he doesn't kill himself,
but you know, he's gone so far already, it seems like there's no going
back. There's gotta be something to live for.

I kinda like how you made Akari and Ryouga break up. That really makes
sense that he knows that he doesn't love her like she loves him. That is a
really hard question to answer even in real life. Can you learn to love
somebody? Is the problem you if you can't love that person? I'm glad that
Ryouga thought about that, becuase I kinda think he would (in the manga I
mean).

At first I thought you were going to make Ukyo and Ryouga get together. I
mean, there was definately something there, but why did Ryouga knock
her out? I thought Ryouga had killed her for a second. I don't think she
can forgive him for tearing up her shop. That is all she has is the
Okonomyaki restuarant.

So I guess that in the end of this fic, Ryouga will have nobody? Well, I
guess that's the way it should be. It almost looks like he's going to
die... *sniff* *sniff*

Suicide, huh? Well, I guess that is one way to make a chi blast that
powerful. I guess there is no way for Ranma to fight something like that.
Maybe he could just dodge it? That would be a easy way to beat it. I bet
Cologne is going to cheat and help him out. :(

One thing, left. How can we get the music to listen to during the fic? You
say the theme from MASH? is that like the TV show? I might could find that
one. But the other song to be played during the Jisatsu
Beaa.s...whatever.. where could we find that?

Well, see ya later. Looking forward to part 4. :)  Wish I could write like
that, but I really don't want to try to commit suicide to do that. hehe
Maybe I could think really bad thoughts for a while..hmm....

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