I want to avoid saying "me too" but wow, what a nicely done story!  
You're excellent at painting visuals, and frankly inspiring me to try my 
hand at writing.  ;)

If I understand correctly, French is your first language?  Aside from 
the overuse of "it was a nervous Ranma" (which was no big deal really, 
just had me giggling each time I saw it), you did a superb job.  Very 
arrousing!  I don't think a male writer on the ffml has ever captured 
the erotic essence the way you have. (I suppose that could be seen as a 
challenge ^_^;). 

Anyway, I've made a "Kanomi Filter" so I'll know when you post more of 
your delicious fiction!  :)

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