Richard Lawson  wrote:

Need a better title.  Any suggestions welcome.

Comments and criticisms appreciated as always.

My suggestions for a proper title are:

"The Ballad of Akari Urryuu"

or

"Raising Akari"

Oh, btw, very good stuff.  But, then again, Richard-sama, that's the
norm for you, ne ^_^?

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[As Thor Odinson types, a knock is heard on his door. He opens it, and is immediately snagged and lifted off the 
ground by Ryoko...]
Ryoko: Hey, you!  When's my Tenchi gonna be in this fic, huh?!?
Thor: Take it easy, Ryoko.  You and your Tenchi will appear in episode 5.
Ryoko: Good.  So...when's my wedding to Tenchi?
Ayeka [storming to my room] WEDDING?!?
Thor: Oh, boy...  
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