Subject: Re: [FFML] [Fanfic][Tenchi][Eva] Angels, Heaven, and Earth (prologue)
From: Ajax
Date: 10/1/1998, 10:47 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com

I think you've made Shinji way OOC in this story. He wouldn't open up
to a lot of people like that, and certainly not one he'd just met (He
didn't even do that with Kaoru until they became chummy.) And he also
wouldn't ask questions about the other person's life.

Anyway,
Ajax






_________________________________________________________
DO YOU YAHOO!?
Get your free @yahoo.com address at http://mail.yahoo.com