-----Original Message-----
From: Gary Kleppe <KLEPPE@execpc.com>
To: ffml@fanfic.com <ffml@fanfic.com>
Date: Sunday, September 13, 1998 1:17 PM
Subject: Re: [FFML] [R 1/2] The Silver Saotome Chapter 1

Interesting concept, but I think you stuck too close to the original
R1/2 series on this one. I can't see something like an ordinary Jusenkyo
curse being much of a bother to beings like Galactus and the Stranger.
It would have to be something on a much more cosmic scale.

I just thought the idea of a fifty foot tall panda was too good to pass up.
Also Gemacticus is weaker in this story due to swallowing a planet that
didn't agree with him and thus has been riddled with indigestion and cramps
ever since.

OTOH, it was amusing, and I hope you'll continue long enough for the
story to get somewhere. (For once. :-P)

So do I. ^_^  And if I continue this I will do a story involving the
Infinity Gauntlet. Be afraid, be very afraid.

Until I find better things to write about. Ja ne