Blast and OH MY, this has been converted from a
nightmarishly dark fic to a story with a real plot line and
development. It was fairly well written ( I noticed one or
two minor spelling and/or grammatical errors) The plot line
moved along at an even pace (after the first rush of
horror).
I felt this deserves reading even if you have read the
original, the expansion greatly improves the story and moves
it from dark(black)fic to interesting.
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I readily admit to being curious to see how soon Misty gets
either major changes  in the Tendo/Saotome Household or
gets  fired. I suppose promoted is also possible. Then again
maybe it will all reset at some point and Misty will have to
start from the beginning again.
It would make an interesting side story, to find out what
happened to the previous Kasumi, another interesting side
story would be to find out if she was the first Kasumi or
were there a long line of them.

--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net


When in danger or in doubt, run in circles,
                    scream and shout.

Always listen to experts. They'll tell you
                    what can't be done, and why. Then do it.

                    Lazarus Long in Time Enough for Love

If violence is not solving your
problems you're just not using enough of it.

     Misato