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:Ranma nibun no ichi - 9 - H is for Hinako                           [Lemon]
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:All characters portrayed in this fanfic are copyright of Rumiko
:Takahashi and Shogakukan Inc, etc, etc, etc.
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Well well...our Kun-chan's form and style have changed a lot.
Very enjoyable fiction.  I recommend this one for all to read. (All who can
legally read it, that is :)  Nice Gos-hinako subplot..Gos's angst was
especially well-rendered.

The old trademarks of her lemons:
1.  lots...of...ellipsis(sp?:)...during...the...lemon...scenes.  Gone ^^
2.  The 80-character long SCREEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAMMMMMMMMMMMMM
MIIIIING the sex partner's name.  Gone ^^
3.  ALL THAT CONVERSATION during the sex?  Gone ^^

Instead the lemon scenes were almost raw; and very thrusting oriented (as
opposed to conversation/human-interaction oriented).  What I mean is that
once characters reach the "main event", normally a lemon writer devotes
a max of a short paragraph to it.  Kun-chan here goes way beyond that and
stretches things out so that the scene feels almost like it's going to
last forever; which is what the characters are probably feeling as well.
Cool effect.

I think it's an improvement over Kun-chan's ultra-sweet-10-coats-of-sugar
lemons of yesteryear.  Well..Ranma No Hentai was sugar-coated as well,
but it was a very exceptional piece despite that.  Hmm...I liked the
old spring roll scene as well, in fact I had to cameo that scene in
one of my own writings. ^^

Well...sorry about this rambling.  It's just I couldn't help
but notice the transition in the author's style.
Heck...Before now, I doubt Seawright would let Ranma be caught
dead saying something as uncultured as "Nnngh!" as he did his duty
by Akane..on a washing machine no less.. O_O .. and he never once
called her Darling or Love ^^