I haven't had much in the way of useful C&C to contribute about
these Slayers story for a while, but I thought I would just pipe up
and reiterate that I'm extremely fond of them.  I especially liked
the concept of "hacker magic" (reinforced by the Neal Stephenson
bit in the last story), and hope to see more of that theme.  I 
also enjoyed the way that you have reintroduced the seed of doubt
about Xelloss and his  role in the whole business this time around -
he was rather benign and put-upon throughout "Chaos," after all.

Keep up the great work - I always look forward to more.

Grayson Towler
grayson@rigroup.net

http://www.rigroup.com/~grayson/relentless