The idea that the Axis won a world-wide victory is ridiculous beyond 
words, but the alternate world is interesting. It needs to be fleshed 
out more, but mind you don't get distracted.

	Critic, I don't think you looked at the rest of the story. In chapter 

3, 

it's noted that the Axis world and our own diverged about (thumbs thru 

fic 

  Except the fact that the Critic is critiquing "Chapter 2" and not 
"Chapter 3," which leads me to believe that this historical note 
should've come earlier (I haven't read this, btw, but from this 
discussion that's obviously a big point)


"That's my story and I'm sticking to it."--JMS, creator of Babylon 5. 
"If you go to Z'ha'dum, you will die."--Kosh, Babylon 5.
"Understanding is a three-edged sword."--Kosh, Babylon 5. 
"Never show your hand until the end."--me, being profound. 

--Razorclaw X

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