Jurai-Knight wrote:

<Snippity Doo Da>

        Sir, I must commend you on originality and simply splendid writing for
the most part.  There were one or two words that were spelled CORRECTLY but
were in the wrong context.
        The one that caught my attention, mostly, was when Ukyou whipped out
her cooking equipment.  Instead of "Blur" you wrote "Blue" I understand it is
a typo, but I simply wanted to point this out to you.
        I, myself, am an avid fan of ANYTHING science fiction.  I must say, as
well, that you pulled this off very expertly.
        I, myself, would like to see a bit more about the "Intelligent"
Ranma's parents... as you pointed out Genma was a Scholar, what would Nodoka
be? Just a typical housewife??
        I am eager to see, if you continue this story, where it might
lead..... so, until then, Domo Arigatou for a good read.

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Sincerely....
Shimitsu Kaoru.
Lost "Dragon-Boy"
of Shimitsu-Ryuu.
Prince of Chaos.
"What makes a curse is simply the view, a blessing to some is a curse unto
you, But acceptance can conquer that fear you hold high, through acceptance
comes peace..... are you willing to try?"
   -Quote from Kaoru Shimitsu.
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