Ronny Hedin wrote:
Seeing a Ranma/DB-xo, I really *had* to comment. ^_^
A bit roughly written, at least the later parts. 'tis not very
descriptive or so, but then I guess the more direct approach works
better in this case.
At any rate, you've managed to cross Ranma and Dragonball *without*
messing around with the power levels, and still managed to get a
story that's both believable (well, provided you can accept either
of those series themselves as believable) and interesting.
Well, not yet at least. ^_^
All in all, good work, DC; looking forward to see where this one goes!
Thanks the C&C, Ronny. Glad you liked it. The next one should be out
in a couple of weeks if I actually type it up.
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Ronny Hedin, thark@hem2.passagen.se, http://nabiki.newberry.edu/thark/
"So, they aren't extraterrestials?"
"Nope, they're manga characters who've lost their hair."
(the unexpected end of X-files)