Ranma Rose wrote:

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    *Clap clap clap clap clap* Splendid.  I enjoyed it
immensely.....Striking straight to the heart of Ranma's problems, the fact
that he is being treated as an object by all of them.  Heck, even his FATHER
treated him as an object to be bartered and traded.
    I must say that if Ranma ever realized how unimportant his words,
reasons, or feelings were to most of his fiancee's, this scenario COULD
likely happen.
    What I am in need of asking, however, is if you plan to continue this
short fic.  It was very nicely done, with two mis-spelles/placed words as
far as I know.  I, for one, would like to know how things faired with
Ranma...
    After all, Ranma is the type of person fate isn't likely to leave
alone.... even without 3 fiancee's, wherever he went chaos would likely
follow.  Don't ask me why, it's a personal perception, I guess you might
say.
    *Nods* I would also like to offer my literary services, if you are in
need of proof-readers for sequels.... if there are ever any.... *Smirks.*
    I look forward to further stories from you.  *Bows, flourishing his
cloak.*

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