In a message dated 7/27/98 11:31:32 PM Central Daylight Time, archive@mich.com
writes:

<< > 2.   Dream Connection
 
 Big problem with this one- Why would Akane ever take Ryoga to bed? Why
 didn't Ranma stop them? The set up with her sleeping with Ryoga just
 wouldn't happen. She is shown quite clearly to think of Ryoga as a
 friend. When Ryoga met Akari, Akane showed absolutely no jealousy or any
 other indications she felt romantically for Ryoga. Maybe in a state of
 emotional weakness if one of Ranma's fiancees became pregnant,
 otherwise, not a chance. Unless you add so references in the story about
 a change in relationship not covered in the manga. >>

A few people have expressed this problem with the second prologue that I
wrote, and I'm responding, because I need to explain.  First off, Akane takes
Ryouga to bed everytime he's around--in P-chan form.  That's what is supposed
to be the case here.  The story never actually says that they have a romantic
interlude;  it's just describing a normal night where Akane takes P-chan to
bed, but something clicks in her head, and she has a dream where she realizes
P-chan is Ryouga.  I wanted to make it appear as if it were a lime, when
actually it's nothing of the sort just for fun.  But, hey, it's my first try
at making something misleading, so of course I need practice.  Well, just
wanted to clear it up!  Ja ne.

--  Erin, Unfortunate Victim of Spring of Drowned Finch