My main problem so far is that I don't buy Nabiki being
as good at keeping hot water from him as she appears to be.
Since she's not turning off the hot water heater at home,
how is she keeping him from getting it without anyone else
noticing?

Nabiki has her secret methods of finding out when Ranma wants hot water then
she switches off the hot water heater (I thought I made it obvious in
earlier parts .... ^_^). As for those methods, the reader doesn't know yet
..... And Ranma is just plain clueless ... a bit of the stereotyped blonde
personality coming in here (Blondes don't flame me! ^_^).

And keeping all the hot water in the school off?

I find it a lttle hard to believe. (Yeah, I know, like a
guy turning into a girl is so believable.)

She's was bribing the janitor as explained in part 2. Ranma is making her
filthy rich ^_^.

    Unless of course the gods are conspiring with Nabiki to
keep Ranma female, in which case I give him a month before he
puts Nabiki in traction along with some of his more
overzealous admirers before heading off to become a hermit.

No, _I'm_ conspiring with Nabiki to keep Ranma female! I have to make the
most of the change in this story otherwise it would get boring, for me as
well as the reader .... Boring is bad! ^_^.

Oh and I have some devious ideas plotted out on how I'm going to use the
other characters.... so don't give up on me yet ....


Ace Sanchez.
"Hey, there's a boring fanfic! Kill it, kill it!"
jsa@fl.net.au

Reid Carson
rcarson@mnsinc.com