Another terrific Slayers episode!  Allow me to add my own
congratulations to the general flood of accolades you've accrued
for your Slayers tales.  The stories are very engaging, funny,
and blend well with the source material.

There was only one moment that I thought was was a bit 
implausible...

    "But the food court!  We should at least visit the food court.  I hear
they have dishes from around the world!  I could go for a Testabournian
Imploding Onion."
    "I'm not really that hungry," Lina said, turning and starting to head
for the marked exits.

Now, Gourry may not be all that quick on the uptake, but I think
that a loss of appetite out of Lina would make an impression on
him.  At the very least, I'd expect him to boggle for a moment.

Anyway, that's a very minor quibble.  I eagerly await the future episodes.


Grayson Towler
grayson@rigroup.net


http://www.rigroup.com/~grayson/relentless