I really liked this story; excellent writing style, and a believable
interpretation of what could have happened after Akane and Ranma marry. I
won't point out the fact that it may make Ukyou seem too perfect for Ranma
(or Ryouga too perfect for Akane), since someone else already did. I'm
probably a little biased anyway, seeing that I am a fan of the Ranma-Ukyou
pairing (and also Ranma-Shampoo), and to a lesser extent, the Akane-Ryouga
pairing.

Is someone going to continue this fic? After all, the original premise was
that Ukyou and Ryouga married each other to make Ranma and Akane jealous,
hoping that Ranma would steal Ukyou away, leaving Akane for Ryouga.
Given that Ranma and Akane are both unhappy with their marriage, it
makes that possibility pretty likely. I'd like to see this actually done. 

-Philip Mak (pmak@cs.dal.ca)