Your public service announcement for today -- "Yup, it went through."
Now, onto your fic....
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Hmm, now this is a novel idea. Washu the all-powerful trying to recreate
whole universes. I'm intrigued, to say the least. This might be a
stretch, but try putting a scene in your next chapter explaining how
she'd go about doing that (rebuilding a universe). Also, I like how you
paired her and Shinji. I think he's someone who's always needed a mother
figure, and in a strange way, Washu fits the bill perfectly. Plus I can
see him learning A LOT from Washu. Thank god you didn't pick Ranma to
stay alive. I enjoy reading Ranma fics, and he's probably my favorite
male character, but sometimes authors really try too hard to put him in a
situation he is really unsuited for. Anyway, I look forward to the next
chapter.
doKuSHInsHA
Member of the #AAS#: Achika Appreciation Society
P.S. -- If you get a chance, can you send me the prologue, or whatever
came before this? Arigatou.
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