Subject: Re: [FFML] FANFIC, RANMA1/2, LEMON, (Not Ranma 1/2 v1p2: Lemon Tea)post1
From: David Johnston
Date: 5/17/1998, 2:39 PM
To: Redneck Gaijin
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Redneck Gaijin wrote:

It is just me or do we have another example of an

"annoying-all-knowing-omnipotent-original-character-who-gets-all-the-gir
ls-and-boys" here? Ranko here is a little too capable.

This was my main problem with it too. Ranko has just -too- much power and
goodies, and the story stops -dead- while Skuld goes through the 'shopping
list.' Furthermore, a complication that could have provided a very
interesting story arc ("You I kill!") is sidestepped by a deus ex machina so
transparent as to turn the stomach.

Still... it's not like Takahashi-sama hasn't introduced characters with
similar levels of cheesiness herself... (I keep thinking of Rouge...)

Yes, but Rouge was an unstoppable bad guy.  (And even she wasn't 
simultaneously a goddess, the queen of a ninja clan, the daughter of 
Bill Gates, and a great nuclear physicist who just invented cold fusion)