Elsa Bibat <aerolbj@epic.net> wrote:

Title: Cat's Prey

The genre is totally correct in description of this story. Hell,
only one writer has forced me to skip pieces of his work so
I can avoid the quesy little feeling in my stomach and running
around checking the windows and doors and other shadowy 
places.

Heh. That won't help; the monster's under the bed. :-)

And Mr. Kleppe's work chilled me to the bone. Heck, 
you put someone who hikes up mountains at night into
paranoia mode. Admittedly your work would have been much
more horrifying if you put in more details....but heck it's
enough for me.           

Interesting... can you point out any particular place where more detail
would help?

Thanks for the compliments, Elsa. I appreciate the work you've been
putting into these reviews, and I'm sure other writers feel the same
way.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics