I think this has some potential, but what's missing is an examination of
how Ranma feels about being disabled in his male form. Is he depressed
about having two bodies, neither of which is to his liking? Or does he
take being disabled as a challenge? His reaction should be the central
point of the story, and I don't get much sense of it at all.

The scene with Tofu was funny, though.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics