>From David Lerman <mdlerma2@gsbpop.uchicago.edu>

It is harder to comment on what is basically an original story since
readers lack the background of character development that comes from
reading manga or watching anime.

And for heaven's sakes, we can't be expected to comment on anything other
than how the characters correspond to our conception of them.

If you want in-depth coverage of your writing go get a MST.

Alright, sure.  Next time you'll request Comment Patrol action from
me (See my page), tell me what kind of review you want and I shall attempt
to comply.  (Hmmm... original stories don't seem to fall under my area of
coverage, t'cha.)

	Henry J. Cobb	hcobb@slip.net          http://www.io.com/~hcobb
    Erosion raises mountains.