Funny, funny. However, you might want to shorten the set-up next
time, since it wasn't substantially different from the original, or from
any number of alternate reality retakes on that first meeting.
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The sign turned around with no other obvious motion on the part of
the spotted ursine. 'You must be mistaken.'
"Ursine" is a colorful, entertaining term, and I would normally
applaud its use. However, in this context, it seems to directly identify
Genma as a bear. Pandas actually belong to the raccoon family (Procyonidae?
I vaguely recall raccoons being _Procyon lotor_), and I think the
scientifically correct noun would be "the spotted procyine," or something
to that effect.
Thog say, "when Thog pick nit, nit know it been PICKED!"
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Patrick Mcclanahan
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