"The Eternal Lost Lurker" <EternalLostLurker@WorldNet.Att.Net> wrote:

Gary, ol' boy...you're starting to crack worse puns in Japanese than
even I'm capable of...and that's scary. 

Particularly, the multiple "chichi" jokes. <smirk> Baaaaaaaaad.

Now, the "bake" pun was pretty funny. 

Heh. It confused a lot of people, I think. But I've never been able to
resist making a good play on words (or even a bad one). :-)

Other stuff...

I liked the "Kung Fu" reference. Heh...e-mail me privately sometime
and remind me to tell you a funny story about that...

Will do.

Comments on the fic itself:

Excellent work. IMHO this is the best of the preludes. Looking
forward to the actual Hearts and Minds series. ^_^ 

Thanks, I really appreciate the encouragement! I'll be getting on to
writing it after some unrelated stand-alones.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics