Hi!

	Nice story, good subject, just a couple of comments:
	-The story's called Mothers and Sons, right?  And yet, under half
the fic is actually about Ranma and Nodoka -- the part where they're
actually alone, together, feels a little bit rushed or compressed at the
end.  I dunno.  The stuff with Ryoga and whatnot -- it's interesting,
sure, but is it really necessary for this story?
	-Nice bit where Ranma explodes and tells how he can't talk, can't
express himself, can't cry -- but it seems to come real fast in the
conversation.  Maybe a little more build-up to it?
	-There's a small amount of typos throughout, usually of the
homonym type, like seen/scene and whatnot.

	Well, hope this little comments help a bit.  Since the title
specifies Ranma, will there be a series of these (for the various
Mother/Son combinations out there?)

	Later!
	-Mike Noakes
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