Tom put the card back onto the nightstand and went to take a shower,

never noticing the insignia on the reverse side.
	It was an image of black sunglasses and a large red A underneath 
them.
	The insignia of one of the worlds best kept secrets.
TO BE CONTINUED...

	The Scarlet Letter?  Going to be hearing from Agent Dimmesdale or
Agent Prynne in the future?

	Anyway, it seems to be an interesting idea, although I think it's way
too rushed.  It's hard for a reader to picture what's going on if they
haven't seen the movie Men In Black.

	Try to slow down in the future and add much more description and
perhaps, *gasp*, separation between scenes?

Adam Chris Leigh
Omicron@sprynet.com