Awsome.  Although there are a lot of the "Ranma splits" fanfics
out
there I think you've done something different.  You've given it a lot
more
detail and a hint of realism that (although maybe not completely
Ranmaesque)
makes for a great story.  I hope you continue it. I salute you for
putting 
something in an old plot line that I have never seen before.
	Please keep it up.

					Cat (Lesser God of Ryoga
Fanfics)
					travis.mcintosh@student.oc.edu