On Thu, 19 Feb 1998, Deuce wrote:

I've recently (ie yesterday) gone and read all of the previous
chapters in this story, and I must say, I'm much impressed.  This
chapter in particular stands out in my mind, largely because of the
final confrontation between Ranma and Nabiki.  I *really* liked the
bit with the talk-request... I didn't see it coming at ALL.  Really

Good. :) The talk-message scene has been bouncing around in draft form
since about chapter 2, and one of the big worries we've had was that the
readers would catch on too quickly.

nice work with the 3rd-person limited perspective, focusing on Nabiki.
I would particularly like to see more interplay between Ranma and
Ukyou... especially how he will react to her little secret.  Keep up
the stellar work.  I am really looking forward to future chapter(s?).

Chapter 10 will hopefully be out inna month or two, barring delays from
the Anth Project, ConSer, or an expansion to the Dead Ukyou Inna Sack
game.

-Deuce