My name is Kuonji Ukyou

My bet is that Tenchi is the one who tags her with the cute tag.

Tenchi's sister had come as a
complete surprise.  She had no idea Tenchi had one.

In fact she's had ample evidence during her snooze that her prince
charming doesn't have one.

Maybe after she had worn Tenchi out to-night, she'd pay Ranma a
visit.  A little spice to go with her sugar.

Another Ryouko and Ayeka fan I see.

Ryouko swore long and imaginatively under her breath. She
needed the power jewels in  Tenchi's hilt to re-establish the
connections required to order Ryo-oh-ki to full activation.

Maybe if she'd indicate which Tenchi she was hilting on.

might make it easier to talk Tenchi into handing over the family
jewels.

Like this.

A split screen formed, on one side was Tenchi's imagination,
on the other Ranma's.

Too animangy, thinking in manga terms might be better here.

"Tenchi, give
me your balls.  Now!"

She knows what she wants and isn't afraid to say so.

"Are you sure this is on?"

Hey, she paid for that mic.

Now that there was no
turning back, they could not help but wonder if they had done the
right thing.  What had they unleashed?

Why not show this discussion then?

"There now, that should give me a chance to
get to know my future daughter-in-law, and to talk her out of
extracting vengeance on Genma."

Yeah, she's such a traditional Japanese girl that you've taken her to
heart already.

"Akane?  What are you doing here?"

"Well, the author figured that a dozen girls crowded around Tenchi was a
little low, but I hate boys anyway so..."

I just got a vision of P-chan and Ryo-oh-ki, ugh!

"Meow," had been  the sound, and it had come from
everywhere.  Just like before.

"Yes, my son, er daughter is so afraid of giant transforming spaceships
that..."

Forgetting all pretense of
dignity,

It seems to be the only sort of dignity she's got.

"She had the genetic traces that are part of the royal familie's
code.  All royal guardians are equipped to register that particular
code string."

Then why don't they finger Tenchi too?

If this was her brother's child, then
she had responsibilities to her,

Too twisted, just say niece.

"Aki-chan, time for bed, but down your toys and come with
mommy."

There seems to be a pattern of intentional word-slips here?

Sasami had sent him here to get
Ayeka's controller.

What was Sasami's response to Ranma?!?

Strange Kangi
covered it's front,

Not really, the style is wrong.

"I'm not a cat little one, there is no need
to fear me.  Have you ever seen a cat like me?"

She speaks!

"I thought Yosho
was a just a warrior. How could his sister still be alive?

Legendary?

"A place called Jusenkyo."

Akanenniichuan!

and did not have the heart to tell her she didn't need
no help in how to be a girl.

Ranma syntax.

	Henry J. Cobb	hcobb@slip.net          http://www.io.com/~hcobb
    She was flawless, just like a china doll.
    Wherever she went, it was pottery in motion.