Hmm... that didnt post right.
It seem's I screwed up on the word wrapping or something
and on my second time reading it I noticed a few spelling error's..
stupid Word Perfect 8 always trys to correct things for me so 
sometimes when I type "when your at so and so's" it changes at
to and.. you'll notice that in the end of the fic. 

So ah.. should I like go though and fix those error's and repost?

I've never had much luck with posting my stories to the list..
Lost memories was the first fic I finally got the hang of a few
years back.. and now once again, I realize I suck at this stuff ^_^

anyways.. enough babble on my part, tell me what you think, and if
I should try to fix it up and repost it before working on part two.. or 
if I should even write a part two, the fic is pretty corny so far and it'll
only get worse.

-Entomorph
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My mask is my demon, Your god is my hate,
My Wrath is my sin, My sin is my fate...
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