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From: kleppe@execpc.com <kleppe@execpc.com>
To: fanfic@fanfic.com <fanfic@fanfic.com>
Cc: Gary Kleppe <kleppe@execpc.com>
Date: Thursday, February 05, 1998 2:03 PM
Subject: [FFML] [C&C] Long and Winding Road 2


Ah Zen, I have to say, I love your writing, and this is the one fic that I
have been waiting on forever ;-)
(now I just have to finish Heaven and Earth ;-). This was definitly a cruel
fic. As much as I love Akane and the rest, this was done just perfectly. My
one comment, is that I hope in the future, you let Ukyo be a character with
a little more flaws. For instance, perhaps a bitter fight w/ Nodoka when
Nodoka leashes out. This would be cool, becuase it does a harsh daughter vs.
Mother situation. Right now, Ukyo's too _perfect_, though she is clearly
better then Akane.