Hmmmm.

	Well... I know absolutely nothing about the series itself, so I
can't make any kind of character assessments or any of that stuff.  I'm
guessing it takes place rather early on in the manga continuity (if not
before it even begins?).  I like the feel of it, though -- maybe the
series is worth checking out...
	Well written, though -- better than even HoI, I'd say.  I wasn't
going to read it, actually, but it drew me in, so I guess that says
something.  I've got a feeling the title character will read a lot like
Ranma -- no surprise, really, since I'm guessing he's not all that
different than Ranma was, either.
	Well, I won't annoy you with requests to turn out the next chapter
of this series -- you've probably got, ah, other projects on the go, no?
<smirk>  Although this looks like it could be quite good -- too bad I
don't know the series at all...

	Later!
	-Mike Noakes
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