First things first, when did Gendo show an interest in politics? One scene 
he is a commander, next he's the vice president. Not even the slightest 
hint in that direction.
Second, this may be just me, but I'm bothered by the fact that your fic 
follows B5 a little too closely. Almost as if just the characters were 
switched. Yet you kept all their special powers.
Under the circumstances, I'm forced to wonder how the Juraians could have 
defeated let alone occupied the Demon Gods. They're not that weak and never 
were. That's just the beginning. I hope you can address this.
Finally, get a spell& grammer checker. You're still making typos and 
mistaking "your" and "you're".
Get your act together and you'll write a great story.