Nice touch, writing so much of this from Mako-chan's perpsective.

	'Kaneda's' Move: The logic behind this is sound, and it would have
worked if the author permitted it (he'd never do that of course, but
that's beside the point). 
	Only problem... 'Poo + Mako-chan + Kaneda = Ugliness ^_^

	Just something to think about: Personally, I'm worried that you
are writing yourself into a corner insofar as Kasumi/Kaneda is concerned.
The only way Cologne would _ever_ undo the cat-tounge is if Shampoo quite
literally begged her to do so (Shampoo might know or be able to obtain the
counter, but Cologne coud re-establish it and we'd be back where we
started).

	OK I have to ask, WHO THE BLOODY HECK IS C-CHAN!?!?!?!?!?!
	Just a hint, please?

HTG (dreading the arrival of Mousse)