Subject: Re: [FFML] (C&C)(MST) Mama's Hand Part 2
From: Douglas Helm
Date: 12/10/1997, 5:54 PM
To: MXJK67C@prodigy.com (CHRISTIAN A ROGERS), fanfic@fanfic.com

[Trident: R+?
Sakura: More serious then R, not serious enough for NC-17... sorrta 
like Starship Troopers.
Trident:(Small smile) Ah.  That movie was enjoyable.]

Yes that's exacly right. <nods> Yes Starship Troopers was good, although I
hear the books better.


AUTHOR'S WARNING!!!

[Flashman:(As all three wince) Yow!  Watch the volume level.]

Gomen nansi, wants to make sure people realize that there's something
important ahead.

[All: And we had a tougher time reading it.
Flashman: Not that it was bad but to see what you were doing to Usagi-
sama... (shudders)]

Understood.

[(Flashman notices Sakura and Trident staring at him intently.)

Flashman: WHAT?!
Sakura: Oh nothing important.  Just that I remember God Boy telling 
you once that he was discussing something with a friend of his that 
TRIO sparked an idea that Serenity and Endymions marriage wasn't as 
happy as it seemed and I seem to remember in the first part Endymion 
saying something about Chibi-Usa not being his.
Trident: Is it at all possible...
Flashman: I hope not.  (Shudders)]

Actually this came from an idea Luker-san gave me. No I won't tell that
would ruine the story.

[Flashman:(A barely suppresed rage filling his voice) I hope you die 
a slow death involving painful, blistering, pus filled sores that 
make you slowly degenerate into a vegatable physicaly, with your mind 
intact and Serenity gets to laugh in your face and after years of 
being bed ridden, with only a filthy bed pan and the rats that occupy 
it for company, then... maybe, you pass away.
S/T: Amen.]

Oh don't worry, his fates suitable horrible. Just wait until the senshi
find out about him. He'd better prey that Pluto doesn't violate her own
rules and brings Saturn into the future to preform a vivi-section (sp?)

[All: YAY!!!!
Sakura: None of us have ever really liked Chibi-Usa, but you gotta 
feel happy that she got away from that... that... BEAST.]

Well I like Chibi-Usa... honest.

[(Flashman and Sakura have both their hands over their mouths as they 
try to hold in their laughs.  Trident fights to keep his mouth his 
normal neutral line as a large grin trys to force its way on.)

Flashman: Oh hell.
All:BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!]

(snicker) I knew you'd like that.

[Sakura:(Scrunches her nose [cutely] in confusion) Funny.  I thought 
Ikuko knew about and didn't mind Mamoru, and it was Kenji that didn't 
approve.]

Actually this is before Ikuko knew about Mamoru. Up until the first ep.
where Chibi-Usa appeares I never saw any real indication that even Ikuko
knew about Mamoru but I could be wrong.

[Trident: That is stating the obvious.
Sakura: I don't know... the scene might have worked better if you had 
cut immediatly on Chibi-Usa crying "MOMMY!"  Especially since the 
nest line somewhat restates what was just said.]

<nods> That was a rough bit. I might tweak it a little later on to give it
more emtional impact. It would certainly work better.

[Trident:(His glow fades) Why is she calling for a Nanny?
Sakura:(Sighs as hers fades as well) Dummy.  Nani means "What" in 
Japanese.]

<urk!> Forgto to put in a word definition section.

[Flashman:(takes several practice swings with the Sentai Saber) She'd 
better not... Doug.

(With the auras glowing around Sakura and Trident and Flashman 
holding the Sentai Saber, the three look VERY dangerous.)]

Sorry can't tell, that's for other parts.

[Trident: I think you meant to type "mean" and not "mena".]

Thanks, I'll correct it.

[Sakura:(Trembling with rage) That... that... MONSTER!
Trident:(Popping out his trident) He must pay for this outrage.
Flashman:(Errily calm) He's mine.]

Please not that a certain other character already castrated every Endymion
she could find.

[Flashman: Yeah, like having another guy named Christian or Chris in 
the same room with me.  It gets so confusing who's talking to who 
sometimes.]

Unoffically I have four first names. When you have three other brothers you
learn to answer to the other three as well.

[Flashman: You may want to delete that comma after "padding".]

Yep.

[All: We've got some.
Flashman: She's probably not going to take it well when she finds out 
who it is.]

Heh... I don't think anybody is going to take it well.

Flashman: Good work.  Keep it up.

Thank you, I appreciate the MST as well, it's very encouraging.

Sakura:(Still glowing blue) Yeah, but if you DON'T make this Endymion 
pay for what he's done...
Tridnet:(Still glowing gold)... we WILL.
Sakura:(Turns to Flashman) If you'll excuse us for a moment Flash-san,
we gotta go burn off this extra ki.
Flashman: How ya gonna do that?
Trident: We will use those cardboard cutouts of "him" that Sakura 
made last week.
Flashman:(Shocked) You DIDN'T!
Sakura:(VEG) I did.  Let's go Tri.

(The two fighters stand up and leave.  Soon, explosions can be heard 
>from outside.)

Not to worry Endymion will pay, I just can say how. That would spoil plot. 


Doug

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