Here's part 3 of A Bitter Future. For somthing that I put up only as an 

idea,

You should be more careful. Is it "A better future" or "A bitter future"?

noticed were the nine white enemy EVA units, the EVA 05 series.

The Mass Production EVAs, units 5-9.

Her new school uniform looked similar to her old one.

Guess they didn't change anything in 18 years.

Asuka looked at the purse. "Who did you say dropped it

off?"
	"This real nice young woman. She had long brown hair
and funny marks on her face and her voice was just...like....
Ka...Ka..."<<

What a cop out! I think you should try a more plausible way of handling 
that. You got one thing right at least.

Although she had never meet her, Asuka had learn not to hang
around Dr. Tofu when he was thinking of Kasumi Tendo.

How long has she been here? Must be a quiet period if none of the regulars 
have dropped in at all.

	After she was a safe distance away from the clinic she

looked into the purse. It was indeed her purse! It even had her
NERV ID in it! Inside it was some makeup, Money, a fold piece
of paper, and her Passport.<<

As I said, too convenient. Not believable enough.

	"What? You think the world's gonna end."

You haven't the slightest idea Nabs!

	"Do I Know you?" Asked Asuka as coldly as she could.
	"Ah...No. I guess you don't remember....OH-OH! Trouble."

"I found you passed out in the lot." Right?

	"OH PIG TAILED GIRL!! AT LAST YOU BRAKE SAOTOME'S
FOUL SPELL AND VISIT ME INCOGNITO!"

Man, I didn't know his vision was that bad.

	Suddenly Asuka felt herself being pulled off the boy.

It would be more dramatic if she was drained, flopped to the ground then

found herself face to face with a teacher that
looked just like Miss Hinako, except this one was twenty-six years old.

Finally, if you haven't figured out how to place them yet, you could put 
Gendo and some of his aquaintances at Nekomi as students or faculty.