"Sir, Unit 02 has breached through armor plate number 5! At this
rate, they'll make it in about 20 minutes!" Cried Makoto.

Why haven't they cut power to the EVA yet? Even if they did it now, it would still take longer than 15 minutes for Kaworu to get to the TD.

"A lie! It was all a lie! NOTHING BUT A LIE!!" 

Looks like the Angels should have done more intelligence before striking NERV. Suckers.

The control over the second EVA was lost as both boys saw the
goings on.

What going ons? Besides Kaworu on the ground crying there.