Hi all! I really need some C&C on chapter 2 of my fic "Hidden Fires." I'm
thinking of revising it, but I'm not sure where to start. I'm begging
y'all! Anyway, I mentioned earlier that I was planning on skecthing up
some illustrations to go along with the story... I have one sketch up on
the web (http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Temple/6226) that I did, but the
major illustrations are still being worked on. I'm putting chapter 3 of
"Hidden Fires" on hold until I get some feedback and/or until I finish
painting that Ryo-oh-ki and Chibi-Chibi picture on the dorm hallway...
Jess, the LilTigre