This story would be more convincing if we had some idea what Ranma's
destiny was supposed to be, since as it is, it more or less fails to
convince me that her suffering was really necessary.  (Vague contentless
talk about Destiny is a good way to cause me to explode ^_-)

However, the characterization of the guardian angel is very well done,
though I want to smack him/her afterwards :)

 John Walter Biles :  MA-History, Ph.D Wannabe at U. Kansas         
ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu       
rhea@tass.org              http://www.tass.org/~rhea/falcon.html
rhea@maison-otaku.net      http://www.maison-otaku.net/~rhea/

New CS Lewis Quote :)
"This does not mean that we are to be perpetually solemn.  We must play.
but our merriment must be of that kind (and it is, in fact, the merriest
kind) which exists between people who have, from the outset, taken each
other seriously--no flippancy, no superiority, no presumption.  And out
charity must be a real and costly love, with deep feeling for the sins in
spite of which we love the sinner--no mere tolerance or indulgence which
parodies love as flippancy parodies merriment."
--The Weight of Glory