RPM - acct 3/5 wrote:

Okay, did big revising on the bowling scene.
Hope ya like it.

Changed the end a bit, dedicated to ol Johnny Biles.

Okay, I'm fairly certain this is near the final edit, and
I ran the sucker through a spellchecker severeal times.
Considering this is, I think the 'possibly final' draft,
if I missed something still, feel free to nag.

Other than the minor spell-check, looks good.Ship it.

   Kyosuke never bowled in his life, and it showed.  He briefly,
_very_ briefly, considered using his powers to help him look at least
decent.  Then the sensible part of his mind reminded him that his
family had to move several times because they were wreckless with the
power in the past.

"...they were reckless..."
Stephen Tsai
--
Kimagure Productions|Nephrite:  [Exasperated.]  Yes, it's
    --present--     |a dark evil mark!
 Orange College #31 |Man:  [Shocked.]  Ahh...  I just
  Sailor Ranma #18  |wanted to knowwhere the bathroom was.
   *Coming Soon*    |Nephrite:  ...
Stephen Tsai        |
stsai@netcom.com    |Bishoujo Senshi Sailor Ranma #18

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