Jonathan Burke wrote:

This is a little alternate universe that I created.
Enjoy.

"Beautiful Liar"

A fanfic brought to you by the diseased mind of Jonathan Burke

	I rarely reply to the list but I figured that this desevrved it. Why
you ask? I mean it is almost a shock fic from the blatant overly done
characters, but in the core the writing is some of the finest I've seen
in a long time. Here is a story that takes extreme, stereotypical
characters and weaves them into an interesting tapestry. It takes skill
to make extreme charactes work. I'm not saying it doesn't take work to
make a good 3d character wokrk either, but they are different forms of
writing. Anyone can throw down a name on papaer, give it a description
and have it wander around for a while. When the character becomes
interesting and intriguing then I say skill has been exercised. And I
see glimmerings of that skil within the first part.
	I wholly applaud this work, and hope that it continues, even if it is
completely twisted and wrong, but that has never pulled a good story
from my grasp.

	nora-masaru

	Joseph A. Kohle