End of Part 1.

	Interesting. Rather unlike the others, the way that you're
expanding your writing world. Focusing away from Ranma and Akane. I like
that.

Notes:

1) Normally I don't send unfinished stuff to the list, but
what the heck.

2) I don't think Talswapr will like this much since I'm
breaking two of his general rules: "annoying new
characters" and "a love interest for Nabiki"

	Forget Taleswapper. He's not the word in fanfiction, however
widely known his commentaries are. Keep going.

So what do you think?

	Good change of pace from your Seasons and previous Color stories.

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