This ended so far from where I expected this story to go (when I read
part one) I am totally amazed. I expected a light weight Ranma has a
double. instead you gave me a story I can compare to Zen's Bitter End.
I can't say I liked the end of this one. I can see where Kodachi's
death was necessary forshadowing of future plot lines. I would like to
see what happens to both Ranma's and Jack and the usual list of
suspects. Where did Kuno T. get his glowing sword? Why did Kuno T. get
a glowing sword? I will admit this was very IC for most of the
characters except Keno and I have a feeling you will explain his
actions as well. One favor; if it's not to late don't make Cologne
blind.

until my ISP argues with the internic again

Rick Robinson


rik@cfanet.com