Ok, I'm not done with this chapter, but as enough people have asked
me,
here is the rough for the chapter.  The word "rough" implies this copy
is
as tough as sand paper and as palatable as a fully inflated
blowfish...

so what, some of my final drafts are like that :P

    Fatora smiled as she did seem to really like this submissive
and subdued Alielle.  It sort of made her feel special that
Alielle wasn't out to find other girls.  "Well, come now.  You
have to help me to put this one.(on?)"

* * *
    Shayla-Shayla and Nanami peered around from a giant stone
column, the object of their attention none other than Makoto.
Makoto sighed sadly, staring at the fountain in the garden,
petting Ura.

Ura was with Alielle in the last scene.  does that cat have the ability
to teleport too?  cool :P

    Nanami looked at Shayla-Shayla.  "He looks so sad.  Why don't
you go and cheer him up?"  The red-haired priestess stumbled and
grabbed the column for balance as Nanami pushed her towards
Makoto.

huh?  why would she do that, offer Makoto to Shayla?

    Shayla-Shayla growled silently at Nanami.  "Why don't you go
and comfort him!"  She pushed back.

huh?  I'm confused...

hehe...way to go Miz!  my favorite of the 3 priestesses :P

so is this going to end up in a double homicide, or something?