Akane: You mean... you... the whole time I've known you...

Ryouga: I'm sorry to cause you so much pain, Akane-san, I'll understand if
you'll hate me forever now... It's just... well, at first I was just
scared, then, I realized you loved P-chan, and you needed a friend, and...

Akane: Ryouga you baka... you should have told me at the start! What's done
is done, though...

Lina: (She whispers to Ryouga) See? That wasn't so bad now, was it?

Akane: I forgive you, on one condition.

Ryouga: Anything, Akane-san!

Akane: Get...

Ryouga: What? ("Oh no, she's going to tell me to get out of Nerima forever
now!") Get what?

Akane: Get me a real pet! I've lost my little P-chan, I'd like another pig!
(Ryouga crashes to the ground in surprise.)

WHAT!! That's IT!! That's all he get's!!! NO WAY!! Akane might have
forgiven him
in a couple of days but she would pounded him into the floor a couple of
times!
Oh well, that's what they call artistic license. 

Anyways, (now that I've gotten that out of my system) it's good series.
The way 
the characters from both series act towards each other is nice and the
action 
flows really well. I love what you did Goury! The only thing I don't
like is the 
way you're characterizing Ranma.

Contrary to what Akane might say, Ranma is not 'that' much of a jerk.
The only times
he isunlts Ryoga is after he says he going to kill him or he's doing
something with 
Akane and he does that out of jelousy. You were right on the money about
insulting 
Lina thow.

Finally, if your going to pair up Akane & Ryoga, don't do it
instanteneosly after the
first date. Also, don't make Ranma give up to easily on Akane. 

Hey! I've got an idea! Why not pair up Lina and Ranma. The're perfect
for each other!
I'd love to read about that!!