SKJAM!:  He should feel a little bit of guilt about ditching Akane, 

and 

claiming he doesn't "belong" to anyone...

Well, this *is* Ryouga. And he's feeling quite sympathetic to this 
poor girl...

Kira:  Ah.  Hikaru has a conscience.  That will make things easier 

if a 

way can be found to cooperate, but harder if one of them has to die.

Hai, one of her best traits is that she cares about others a lot.

Kira:  She seems awfully accepting of a bandanaed pig she just met.  

SKJAM!:  If I recall correctly, Rayearth's Hikaru tends to form 

instant 

attachments to animals.  And she did see him briefly before, with 

Akane.

She loves animals. Especially kawaii ones...look how quickly she 
bonded with Mokona...

SKJAM!:  Only to find out you were raped and drowned two years later?

  I 
dunno...

Well, it *would* have made a huge difference to what happened back in 
Cephiro after her 'death', as you'll see in the rough draft of 
chapter 7...

SKJAM!:  Oh, that's right.  Cologne didn't get around to telling 

Hikaru 

about where the glove came from.

Nope, not yet...unless I change that in Chapter 4....

SKJAM!:  I'd like to see a description of Hikaru from Fuu and Umi's 

POV; 

after all, she's changed a bit...

Hai, I'll include it when I flesh this chapter out. I'm probably 
going to spend this week revising and polishing the first seven 
chapters, then reposting them.



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"If it looks like a duck, and walks like a duck, and quacks like a 
duck...pour hot water on it."
Ryodachi Kouma
"The Eternal Lost Lurker"
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