| Subject: re:[fanfic] [cC] Together Again: 2937 Chapter (ACT I) (FINAL VERSION) |
| From: Richard Robinson |
| Date: 6/28/1997, 12:50 AM |
Reply-to: rik@cfanet.com |
A few points:
!. in the first story Jupiter breaks Priss's arms and they
sedate her in order to keep her from a fight to the death
with the Boomers who {killed} Nene and eventually they
freeze her involuntarily. so why is Jupiter ragging her
about running out or giving up or going back to the
freezer.
2. giving both kph and mph for the speeds nice touch and
one I'd love to see more often as not everybody can convert
metric to english (or the reverse)
3. Time travel should be realitively simple since all three
of the main shows had some way or another to accomplish it
so why is Akane still dead and the same for Ukyo. I would
think that some time or another it would have been useful
to bribe Ranma or Ryoga and these would seem to be an
obvious bribe and one that might even work.
3.(a) this is actually outside of the story but I think it
is an interesting question anyway.
4. I actually liked the best. best but this was good, it
just lacked the tight focus of the first story.
Rick Robinson
rik@cfanet.com