Subject: re:[fanfic] [cC] Together Again: 2937 Chapter (ACT I) (FINAL VERSION)
From: Richard Robinson
Date: 6/28/1997, 12:50 AM
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rik@cfanet.com

A few points:

!. in the first story Jupiter breaks Priss's arms and they 
sedate her in order to keep her from a fight to the death 
with the Boomers who {killed} Nene and eventually they 
freeze her involuntarily. so why is Jupiter ragging her 
about running out or giving up or going back to the 
freezer.

2. giving both kph and mph for the speeds nice touch and 
one I'd love to see more often as not everybody can convert 
metric to english (or the reverse)

3. Time travel should be realitively simple since all three 
of the main shows had some way or another to accomplish it 
so why is Akane still dead and the same for Ukyo. I would 
think that some time or another it would have been useful 
to bribe Ranma or Ryoga and these would seem to be an 
obvious bribe and one that might even work.
3.(a) this is actually outside of the story but I think it 
is an interesting question anyway.
4. I actually liked the best. best but this was good, it 
just lacked the tight focus of the first story.

Rick Robinson

rik@cfanet.com