Creepy and good.  Kuno's clueless interpretation of Ranma's and Akane's
actions heightened the impact.  I think you should polish it up and send it
to RAAC.  So much of the power of the story came from what was not said and
not shown, leaving the reader's imagination to fill in the missing pieces.
I think it would strengthen the ending if it ended with just a passionate
kiss and words rather than the physical groping.  Or perhaps it could be
phrased differentlly, as I found the use of the word "groping" to be
jarring, perhaps even a little comical at the wrong time.



dml