On Tue, 24 Jun 1997, Trisha Sebastian wrote:

To tell you the truth, I noticed it right away.  No offense, Susan,
but it was a little too obvious.  When Ukyou said, "I've got some
new ingredients" my sensors went array.  Probably it was because
I know your writing style too well, Suse.

I hardly think that the obviousness wrecked the story.  The awesomely
witty puns and turns of phrase were enough to make me love this piece
immediately. :) 

Foxtrot the Furryous, CBTFH, ret.

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